All Comments on 'The Watercolor Ch. 02'

This story has a lot of potential. It seems to me that it is a dramatic romance, although, for some strange reason, I think it may have a late happy ending ...

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

But I really hope these first two chapters are not indicators of the pattern to follow.

Short segments from her memory. 30-45 seconds to read 1 to 1 1/2 pages, capped with a cliff hanger.

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...a much more polished story, referring to the specific elements I mentioned in your forum feedback request.

I like you mentioning parallels with Marie and her boyfriend, and it interests me to see where you take those. It will become paramount how you explain why she didn't marry Christian since this seems to be quite the bombshell waiting to explode.

But I'm going to be that fan. I'm waiting patiently for the next chapter, but I don't want to wait. I love this story. Please write faster! (At least I warned you.)

The possibilities are endless....I am enjoying your steamy romance novel....mmmm.

Are you writing more?

Interesting story sadly unfinished