All Comments on 'The Way Back Ch. 01'

I'm hooked, keep it up.

A very nice start to a story that I hope will continue to hold my attention.

Beast I've seen in quite a while here.

Steve

Great story...please keep it coming quickly.

WOW! Chapter 1 was more than an interesting start throughout, keep it coming!

Great start to the story. I suppose it is a red herring, but all bets for now are on good ole Derek to be behind what happened to Allan.

I'm enjoying it, but yes, it does seem like Sydney's right... Derek is the perfect bad guy.

and even darker towards the sunrise, TK U MLJ LV NV

and now you have my interest. Definately a snake in the woodpile here....Wonder how deep it goes?

the fiance wanted Ann for himself,

arranged for the ambush of the husband, (from which Allan was not supposed to recover),

the phony PI report, implicating the husband as a cheating no good scoundrel,

so he could become the chief protector and comfort giver. Thereby replacing the long lost husband and taking control of the wealth and wife for himself.

where the story seems to be heading. But who cares, it's the journey, not the destination, that interests me. A great first episode, keep them coming.

The story is part Mystery, part Loving Wives, part Erotic Coupling. Everyone should be able to enjoy it if they are so disposed.

A millionaire goes missing and there's no Nationwide search! I dunno...

You have laid out the path so well, it will be well trodden by me.

Why didn't the police do this at the beginning when he did not know who he was?

im in for the long hall. This is very good. Five stars.

can be taken of john doe's but with no record Allan would not be in any system to match them with. T

has got it right. That's my guess too.

Without a criminal record or an application for either a career in law enforcement or a government security clearance there is little chance of any fingerprint record in a database.

You chapter 1 impress me. Interesting story indeed.

your a dick. why try and ruin the story. an idiot like you would always read it first and then claim to "predict" the end. make you look a proper clever dicky won't it.

A very enjoyable read so far. Looking forward to the development of the story and Alan resuming his life -- and finding the truth of his past.

I enjoyed this first chapter, I grew up around that area,my first job was in. Altringham,and have stayed at the Pelican. " Sweet Home Manchester" !

I would easily say your are one of the writer among the best in this site, the stories are so real and authentic that would have happened to someone.

You definitely have my attention! Can’t wait for chapter 2

Splendid indeed!

Back for another reading . Still one of the best reads on this site. Can't tell you how much I enjoy your writing style....so easy and so enjoyable . Thanks for all your effort and hard work.

I've only just discovered this story. I can't wait to continue it. Excellent premise and very well written. Thank you!

I’ve got a bad feeling about Dirty Derek the dodgy builder, maybe he’s just a bit too convenient and a red herring….

5⭐️ As it’s a great tale so far, looking forward to seeing the denouement at the end…

OK, I’m hooked. 5 stars.

5 stars - I don't usually like these kinds of stories BUT this one has hooked my interest as well.

Great stuff but also please don’t sign documents without reading them, dear readers.

Superb!