All Comments on 'The Wedding'

When is the next wedding you're going to? I'll dye my hair

Would love more,great story!!!!!

I'm a guy, and had a woody the first time Simone locked eyes with you. But it isn't just the sexy writing. Your inner thoughts were delightful to read, causing me to smile several times. Of course, we all want to read more stories from you. There's some wet panties out there this morning!

Wow I loved it! So naughty with fingers in her pussy underneath the table. I hope you continue with this story.

Let me know when your next wedding is, I'll be there with bells on so you know that I'm cumming.

Nice cliffhanger, it would be a shame to ruin by a quick ending!

So hot. Hell, that girl sounds so hot that I want to fuck her too

Very nice for a second story. We feel the background of character is well studied, and your personnal feelings in displaying them gives you credit.

The descriptive scenes of the surrounding is something you should keep on to set the place, and your characters feels real, we get how they evolve as realistic beings. Maybe one down side is how turned on at once they get, and don't fight back their feelings at first, even if only mentally.

Anyway, hopefull to read some sequel

Quick, spicy and hot. The short length works well and it is a breezy read. The ending is open to continuation, but I think it stands fine by itself.

Such a lovely read. Thanks Kara

I like stories that are intense, short and sensual. Liked your story setting, the intertwining of the three characters. There was one paragraph early in the story that was confusing and a few other sentences that could be tighter written. Love the cliff hanger. I await.

Loved your story Kara. You built on my arousal through the story. For me very enjoyable all the way to the end with a cliffhanger for us needing a chapter 2.

Will be watching for chapter 2.

Thank You for writing. Loved it

sue

this is so hot - i can almost picture myself in your place at the table..i'm soaking wet just reading this!

Beautiful pacing and description. I am sitting here in a puddle, thinking about what Simone is about to do to me....

I'm a Ginger who now wishes I had an Irish accent.

Bravo! I had no idea you were this good! It was a little over the top, maybe, but I don't care. I am truly beginning to love the saga of Kara and Steff. (I wanna see Steff get caught cheating; just sayin'.)

(The syntax needed a little polish, but I can get past that kinda thing when the story is genuinely sexy.)

What a deliciously wetness-inducing tale you can tell!

Amazing

After reading "Smoke Rings" I decided to sample this story. As a fellow author humbled by your style, I must say it did for me what "Smoke Rings" did. So well developed, erotic and arousing. Your pace is perfect. Having just discovered you on the advice of a member, I was wondering why you haven't written for a while. Please do! Easy 5 stars. I sent you a DM and would love to pick your brain being so new to writing. Hope you will respond.