All Comments on 'The Wedding Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Oh, what bodies!

"...Sarah felt a familiar stirring in between their writing bodies. "

"...in between gorans and breaths"

"Stob, stob. you nead to pay attention to de tail" she crid.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
so great, please keep writing

I seriously think this series is starting as one of the best I've ever read. Please continue, you're doing an amazing job.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

more to cancelled date night continue with this story

grumpywolfegrumpywolfealmost 10 years ago
I like

I like what you have done with those three. Keep up the story with part three.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Continue

I have been a part of this site fro more than 7 years, in that time I have read a LOT of stories, and I can count on 1 hand how many have actually been really in depth and made me want to keep up with it and hoping for the next chapter, not only is it a sexy storyline but its very absorbing to the reader, I actually cried at the end of this one. Please keep up the wonderful work! Great job!

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