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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Faithful wives are determined warriors!

Faithful wives are determined warriors! The light of their fire for their husbands' is eternal and bright and burning, never diminished by death. Their promises are never broken whether they be thought, whispered or outspoken. After all they make their hubbys whole. While many of their souls guide and remain in their husbands' hearts, Helen is special. She knows his fate includes no other/s/ she is his soul mate. If only I could find my soul mate, I'm waiting for his presense, and I'll be faithful. A virgin thinks her first time is all consuming and once preformed it can lose its splendor if only done for self satisfaction. My innocence will be taken in exchange for my heart, an unfair trade that leaves me whole. If she could give him a child, through a miracle, that would be a perfect ending. I don't understand why she didn't take him to live her lifestyle with her, unless she understands that fate labels him a father ;) Parents do not need to be wholly of the flesh! One thing I do not understand completely to its full extent... did she sacrifice to sate his love after her demise? What possesed her to make such a life turning promise at their spiritual bonding, (their wedding). Can she foretell of the future, did she sacrifice something, did God grant her permission? What battle did she fight in her right to claim him as hers. ETERNAL PASSION FOREVER! Let me know your story's answers so I may imitate her example in my future ;) The song "I close my eyes and your still there" just took on a whole new meaning for me :D

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