All Comments on 'The Wedding Night'

by diamondph

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Hot night

Loved the story. Cock is throbbing. I would like to hear more about this foursome.

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleabout 8 years ago
Negatives

I trust you'll get some negative comments due to the bi/gay aspect but try to ignore the short-sighted hypocrites. Just keep on keeping on! 5*.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
if anybody should be ignored

it's that dumb ass LarryinSeattle for being the hypocrite

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Needs work

Good story. Needs to become more fluid and please check spelling/grammar.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Very hot. Nice to read a story where everyone is enjoying each others bodies and all that they offer. More stories with these characters would be great.

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