All Comments on 'The Wedding Party'

I'm sorry, I agree, too many coma's. I'll rewrite the story, and submit it again. I wanted to do an edited version, but will not have the time, for another week.

Thanks for your comments and suggestions. Hopefully, the new submission will flow freely.

If you do a part 2, perhaps we'll learn that Dan has been slipping Betty more than just his tongue??!!

nice story too bad you did not tell of your mom going down sucking on his man pole.

Also you should have let the old woman enjoy having her pussy eaten licked sucked toungue f**ked.

good story and I like that you are open to comments about editing. Please keep telling us about your adventures.

Fun story.