All Comments on 'The Wedding Planner Ch. 14'

For just a second I thought the plot moved forward. I was wrong. Is that the twist you are going for?

13ch about the samething... is boring... finish the story ....

The entire story just twists in the wind....

For the last 5 or 6 chapters I have just gone to the last paragraph to see if the story has moved on, but no, just more of the same. I cannot be bothered reading about more of her cheating exploits. We know she is a cheating slut and hubby is an absolute f***wit. Please JPB, do something - torch the bitch, kill the idiot husband off or simply nuke the whole story. Bored silly.

I don't remember who wrote it but it also dragged on and on for many chapters. But the revenge in this story far out weighs the crime. She is just a slut.

I keep hoping they all come down with a fatal disease. Have only been fast skimmimg and frankly the only significant change is the chapter numbers. A decent efotor would have cranked this down to three pages at most, probably less.