All Comments on 'The Welcome-Mat Vol. 01'

by Nick_Faraway

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gentleone58gentleone58over 7 years ago
More please, like the symbolism

This short piece is interesting, to say the least. The symbolism you have expressed is probably very close to truth. I have never quite thought if it like this, though. I am curious to see what else are conditions of crossing the threshold. Is Henry going to get caught spying as she must cross the threshold if he is out all night, or does he somehow know Henry is trying to watch? I assume that there was an agreement prior to her arrival for anal, or am I assuming too much? It seems like he does this often. Will it rain or someone run off with her clothes making her departure difficult?

indysubmaleindysubmaleover 7 years ago
great start

Really looking forward to seeing where this goes. I can already tell that there will be a significant focus on the emotional side of things for all of the characters and am looking forward to reading about what is going on in the minds of all involved.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Keep going!

Holy crap- that was hot! Looking forward to reading more.

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