All Comments on 'The Wet Dream'

What an ending! I was not expecting that at all. great job.

A great story, based on a wonderful concept. I say "Job Well Done".

loved your story

The Ending I didn't see comming,,,,the the rest of it was pure erotic to read,,,,,great story

Okay, that was totally cool lol, I so did not see that coming! Great story!

spelling! Fallace is phallus and it's fellatio.

what a twisted ending. Loved it

Now I have a wet spot of my own. Great story.

Hope all your dreams are wet!

I so totally enjoyed your story. With the exceptionof a few minor errors, very professionally done. Very Hot and steamy, well written, I'm anxious to know if you have written anything else.

that wasnt fair, just when it was getting so fucking good......it turned out to be a dream damn it. Not fair ;c really good though

You set us up for the "it was just a dream" ending so many times in the story, and we didn't take the bate! :P Very nicely done! And a very clever story, too!

Very sweet very beautiful and erotic. Thank you.

Possibly the best erotic gay story I have ever read.

Why?! It was so goooood!! I was expecting them to be a couple! Why would you do this?

This ending made me slightly sad but this is really really good

I love this story, but was disappointed with the “Scott marries Helen” ending. How much more erotic it would have been if these two young men had fallen deeply in love and married each other, coming out to all their friends and relatives as a gay couple. Nonetheless, I love the slow buildup to the steamy shower scene where these two lads become gay lovers. Oh how beautiful it is when semen and sperm are shared between two men. Delightful!

Really enjoyed the story. Had me hard and leaking cum while I read it. Would appreciate another story since they are well written.

Just what i was looking for

Slightly dissapoited they didn't become perminant lovers...... Good story though

why did you do this? I was so in love with their relationship. It was a wet dream? This sucks. I'm so sad

I liked the story but was very disappointed by the ending

Oh my fucking hell this was such a great story and i was wet most of the time as a thing (no drugs) like this happened to a younger me when i pretended to be asleep, oh so hot

Second time reading this story and I still got sooooooooo hard and very wet, Damn you must write more on this same line, Fantastic