All Comments on 'The White Menu Ch. 02'

by ExtraAqua

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topcattoponetopcattoponeover 11 years ago
Wow! That's different!

Strangely compulsive reading. I wouldn't have thought that having cum on food could have sustained more than a short story. You have succeeded in diverting me from that theory. I liked it.

Thunderhead69Thunderhead69over 11 years ago
Excellent Story

I am very intriqued with this storyline. I think there could be many directions this could go in subsequent chapters. I'm looking forward very eagerly to the next chapter and beyond! Thanks for writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great Story!

My boyfriend often jerks off on my food and I just love it. Sometimes he will do it when we have company. That usually starts an awesome orgy. This story reminds me how much I love my man and all the cum he gives me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More please!

Hot nude male waiters with their dispensers ... If only I could find this place in real life!

Keep this going, it's great!

ASONJ23ASONJ23over 11 years ago
Amazing

This story just keeps getting better and better! Please don't leave us hanging and write another installment!

brian358brian358over 11 years ago
Thanks!

Great sequel... and we haven't even got to the main course yet!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
volunteer

I would love to be a waiter in a place like this...

scouse17571scouse17571over 11 years ago
Excellent Story

I wish I could talk my wife into eating cum on her food.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
mmmmmmmmmm

omg I sooooo wish there was a place like this. I would luv my husband to take me there and sample all that delicious cock cream. And maybe even persuade him to try a taste.

ExtraAquaExtraAquaalmost 11 years agoAuthor
More cumming

I've had a couple of people ask if I was going to continue the story. The answer is yes, the next chapter is about half finished at this point. I hope to have time over the next month or two. Sorry for the delay, life just gets that way sometimes. The main course is cumming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
news

any news of next chapter? really cant wait to hear more. keep checking back as im really looking forward to it

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More stories please!

I'd love to read more about these nude waiters, and you could do a lot of great stories based on this theme.

I'd also love if you could write about something akin to wine tasting, only in this case the ladies go on to visit specialty restaurants whose young men supply these delicate tastes.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
main course

Waiting for the next installment of this story is like going to a bad resturant and waiting forever for the next course. I'm soooo hungry. Please serve the main entree.

ExtraAquaExtraAquaalmost 10 years agoAuthor
3rd chapter on its way any day now!

I just submitted the 3rd chapter of this story. It should be out in a couple of days. I'm sorry it took so long, but better late than never, right?

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