All Comments on 'The White Rose Crisis Ch. 05'

im bummed now that it seems that hes not going to have sex with all his female relatives. granted it isnt necessary but his little sister jaimi and cousin lucy would be super hot.

Seems like lve waited a long time for this chapter and looking forward to the next, hopefully it won't be too long in coming.

I have loved your story line and can not wait for the next installment.

Hi love this story keep up the good work hope we are not waiting to long to see what happens I think it was Jaimi the he did and in chapter 2she didn't tell the whole story which she did with shara and the why shara was looking at the rose on the bed and the change in Jaimi after the honeymooners came home she too saw the rose but if will had said agreed to talk to her while she did stretching he would have seen the proof he wants the hickey on her ass

One hell of a story fucking love it keep it up

Love it has me waiting for the next part thank you so much for this story so far . And to the poster that said the hickey was the proof I'm afraid that a enough time has passed in the story for the hickey to fade away and it's not like he will get pictures of all the women's bums to prove who it was

Awesome absolutely fucking awesome xx

Don't take to long to Finnish this piece of work

Great story lots of twist and turn's hope it's not another year to see what happens hope you don't mind me saying this but you don't want to keep it going too long I don't think there can be more than one or two more chapters left in it you don't want to drag it out too long in the event the story would go to far from it humble beginning or have ur readers to lose interest this is only my view please don't think I am putting down your work that is the last thing I would want you to think I love the story and your other works have a good weekend from Irishross

Would be cool if he got the bride pregnant

Love the story can you give us some idea how long will will have to wait for the next part

Great story I like it i really hope it was Sarah will gave her one hell of a wedding present lol

Great story have to admit it is kind of stuck in my head every time I pass the wedding store in my town I think of your story

It's a good story you have the main character doing his head in with worry lol can't wait to see how it ends

This is a hot fucking story it would be great if he got who he slept with pregnant lol another secret to carry round in his head

Your killing me need to know what happens

This is a bit off subject but I hope everyone one is enjoying the eurovion song contest

It's a great story mate hope to see the rest of it soon

I like the story but I hate the way u leave us waiting so long for the next chapter holding our dicks waiting to see what happens

I'm hooked it's is one of the most enjoyable story's I have read in a long time on this and I mean that thanks

Finish it we all love it and you, your writing is first rate. -Thank you

Yes Finish so we can Finish too lol 😁 great story by the way xx

Would be great if he took the bride v card on her wedding night

A Virgin on her wedding night what are you smoking and can I have some lol 😁 read chapter one again that girl knew what she wanted

Hi love the story good job I would like to point out to the other poster that it can't be Sarah for the simple fact that she had a white dress on and will would have noticed it with the little light that was in the room he was able to make out red underwear and bright

nails I'm sure he would have noticed a white dress if he screwed anyone it was the girl he is with at the moment his sister friend

so glad it is the bride but what is he going to do now?? I wanna see a sexy reunion then maybe he gives up and lets little jaimi in on some incest ;)

I told ye it can't be Sarah

It does not matter who he fucked ye are all forgetting the most important thing and that is that we will have to wait another fucking year to see what happens thanks

author says it is. + dresses at the wedding were white or light blue choice it was really dark and he was alcoholic. white underwear and red uderwear are light and dark colors so hed see that difference. i dont think she is pregnant tho

I'm sorry I have to disagree with you the author in chapter 2 led us to believe for a while it was his other sister I really don't think it was Sarah

It was Jaimi all along

Hi how is everyone today hope all is well I hope none of ye mind me putting in my input I myself think in the end it will turn out to be meghan

OK this is my take on it i believe the only people he can truly rule out are his aunt and cousin the two people who knows after that it could be anyone else as for the rose it could belong to anyone who used the room he didn't take it off the woman he fucked he picked it up off the bed and then there's the other side of the coin did the woman he fucked think it was someone one else like if it was Sarah did she think it was her new hubby fucking someone who thinks it is some one else and that could be under the influence of alcohol could be classified as taking advantage and could lead to a different problem

Why not have her get pregnant

Yes I would have to agree it would be a twist to get her pregnant history repeating it's self she would have received a wonderful wedding gift

This story is so good I couldn't but get turn on thank you so much but please finish it Lisa from Ireland xxxxxxx

Fuck me it's game of thrones all over again so many storie going on and the girl has no name and just like it will have to wait a year to see what happens

Going to my cousin's wedding in three weeks I will have to keep an eye on the bridal party you never know lol 😁

This story has me on my toes, i need to know what happens next!!!!

Thanks to the author for one of the best stories i have read on Literotica.

I have to say I have read a lot of story's on literotica over the years. And I have to admit this one is up there with the best. The only fault with it. If you don't mind me saying is the length of time you leave between chapters. Keep up the good work and thanks for the story

Jesus! Reading through all these was amazing. Now just have to wait a few more months till the next chapter is released. Amazing writing. If I may say, try actually writing a book. You would be amazing at it.

Hi all, just so you know I am trying to fit in writing when I have free time...which is almost not at all. I have turned down social stuff for writing nights to get over the Block.

The 6th part of the WRC looks like it will be huge, and may be split across Ch.06 and Ch.07, released at the same time, rather than being 6-10 pages long in one chapter.

The journey has sort of overtaken the sex in this series, as I feel like I am trying to write more emotionally than when I started this years ago. I've tried to follow what other authors recommend in writing styles and things like that, and my "one shot" sex stories have almost disappeared. So while there will definitely be more hot sex, it may be limited in Ch.06, followed by LOTS in Ch.07. If you are still hanging in there to find out what happens, I hope it's because you are as invested in the plot as I have become by writing it. The responses have given me a lot of encouragement - thank you for being here.

Hi I would like to thank you. From myself and everyone else who has enjoyed this story. For taking the time to write to write to us and let us know what you are doing. It's very nice of you. Thank you. I do check every few weeks to see if there is another chapter posted. I and many others will be looking forward to the next chapter. And once again thank you for letting us know what is happening

Can you give us some idea of how soon please

Hi love the story it's great. Oh by the way all I want for Christmas is to see it finished lol 😁

It's a good story but the picture of the bride without a rose dose not mean anything. There was a picture of lucy in chapter 3 without a rose. I really don't believe it is the bride he fucked.

Hi this is a very good story. I have really enjoyed reading it since I came across it. But there is something that I have noticed. Since you have started writing it. The number of people who are reading it has dropped off. I believe this may be down to the fact that it is so long between chapters

Wow this is a hot fucking story. Thanks xxx. Just think about it. the bride Sarah walking down the stairs her brother cum running out of her and drowning her red panties. And then stand have her picture taken talk to family and friends and her new hubby. It's very fucking hot. Xx

Very enjoyable story. I'm looking forward to seeing more. Just one thing. Will seems to be very worried about the fact that he slept with Sarah and he knows what her pussy looks like feels like and taste like. It's a wonder it never entry his head that he filled it with his cum.?????

I love that it's Sarah my heart almost stopped when I read it. I am really looking forward to reading how she will react. How will things be between them how does she feel that she let her brother fuck her. I love it 😘

Very well done. This is a bloody good story. First of all let me say that I am delighted that it turned out to be Sarah. Second of all the way ur going with the story is good. What you said yourself is true it's not just about the sex.. It's about the journey. To find out who is the owner of the white rose. And then try and figure out how to deal with it and how to move on from there. Have to say I am really looking forward to seeing how he will face Sarah. And what will she have to say. And how they will deal with it and can they move on. And will things ever be the same. Don't get me wrong the sex in chapter one is out of this world. I really loved the way it happened it really turned me on. But I have to see how this story turns out.

Really enjoyed this story. Would you ever think about making an audio version of it.

I love this story. The first two chapters had me as hard as fuck. Have to admit I had to rub one out. But I am really into this story. I love what u wrote on the end of chapter 5. Stay tuned for chapter 6 you may now kiss the bride. That's about the only thing that the main character didn't do to her. I looking forward to the conversation between will and Sarah it should be good!!!. Can imagine it. Hi sis how are you how was your honeymoon did you bring me back anything. Sorry I fucked you on your wedding night. I was drunk and thought you were someone else my bad. but it was fun. Oh by the way hope you are on the pill. Lol

Good story. But we're too long waiting for the next installment

Poor bastard! Not!!!!

A lot of us wish we were him right now.

I knew it was Sarah.

But what about Jaime???

Would Meghan share, two wives, l wonder?

What a lovely family.

Lucy jumping on Will and "raping" him was one of the most erotic bits of writing. Beautiful!!!

Can't wait for the closing.

(2/10/2023) Hell of an ending here. Hell of a series. I'm enjoying it immensely.