All Comments on 'The White Thong'

I really enoyed the story, good job!

enjoyable

A fine job of writing despite some errors. I believed every word you wrote as being a true life experience .

I loved it, As I did your other storie you wrote last week

I can't wait to see more from you!

Short and pretty clean. Nicely erotic. You got some character flavor in there too without going into excruciating detail. Sometimes it's fun as a reader to fill in the details for yourself from your own experiences and fantasies. If this is what you're going for, and if you really get sharp at it, you'll attract attention from folks here who prefer this style. Welcome to the game!

I got so horny when I read this. Wow I was fingering so much that I started fisting. I couldn't help myself and now my pussy is throbbing and aching.

Wish it was more detailed but great story