All Comments on 'The Widow Gets Two Sons'

It was a hot story but you could use an editor instead of relying on spell check (she "slimmed" down not "slimed", she croaked in a "hoarse" voice not a "horse" voice). Wonder if this is the end of the series?

Keep this shit off of the site.

... the comment about there being mistakes? I'm not sure. I read it as her croaking in an actual horse voice, like a Mrs. Ed which would be sexy. I also assumed she slimed down, which is urban slang for getting the fold slick.

Bravo.

very nice finish, excellent read. only feedback might be to make it easier for people to read the whole series. The Widow Part 1, etc.

there were some mistakes besides the obvious spelling, grammer, and out of place words. You kept referring to the mother's body as being the typical or classical 1960's beauty, but you kept making references to more modern day things like on-line porn and The Animal Planet. Was this story set in the 1960's, or was her body being compared to some of the beautiful bodies from the 1960's? I am thinking it was supposed to be set in the 1960's based on the reference to Artur's military service during WWII, thus there were no home computers for on-line porn, and cable TV did not exist (no Animal Planet channel).

Also, throughout the series you kept describing her as a blonde, yet in the chapter "The Widow Gets Her Son" you kept referring to her auburn or red pubic hair. That did not add up and created some confusion.

Consistency in time lines and description, as well as better editing, would earned you better scores, possibly 4.5 plus on the star rating system, because the concept was very good.

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