by YKN4949
Amazing, had me hooked instantly. I love a story with a good build up. What happens next though, how do the four women take the news. My only criticism is that the end felt too rushed. Still 5*+ excellent.
my thoughts when i see a new story from you: "i'm definitely gonna need both hands for this"
your stories just keep getting better and better :)
i was most pleased to see that you were able to use a few of my suggestions
i liked pretty much the whole story :)
the slow build-up (not too slow or slow enough to be bothering, but a good speed)
Lalana fooling around with everyone
combining incest with trannies and such, very nice :D
there were also a few points that weren't that relevant to my interests, but that's a good thing. if i don't like a certain act or scene, someone else will be really turned on by that and such diversity is great
so yeah, again i really loved your story, it really feels like my secret fantasies/fetishes came alive
i hope you keep writing :)
i loved this story! it was great and this was my first tranny story and im sad that the rest will be horrible compared to this <3
Great time reading. I specially like chapter 3 when the harassment begins, and how her thoughts get wetter as her sexual drought keeps increasing. Fortunately she's a girl who knows well to take the opportunities...
I'm refreshing my English with Literotica (learning lots of dirty words ;). I don't understand the last pose of the family where they are over the stairs. I have read the scene several times, even tried to draw a sketch with Paint, but I can't figure it and I think I'm missing something!
It would be great if someone sends me a sketch of this for me, even with Paint and stickTgirls :)
Thanks and keep writing!
i know this story is 2 years old but it would be nice to continue to where lalana sends to girls to bangkok without the mothers for srs and makes the mothers into slaves
stars for this story
the gradual buildup for all the characters into their sexuality was delightful. your ability to tell the story and maintain each of the personalities as a consistent factor really helps me as a reader to remain quite interested in the development of the plot. as always , a long but fascinating sex journey. thanks.....again.
Many thanks ! I love reading the stories you write, and keep wishing that I was one of the characters in them (generally the one that has the most orgasms, of course).
I had started tonight by reading walterio’s story Strangest Bedfellows, but stopped pretty soon when I got sick of the constant “now that [other character] knew that she was really a man” and “[male character] was attracted to her so he must be gay” bullshit. I am so glad that i found your story instead, which is infinitely better and more sensitive. I sincerely thank you for writing it and look forward to exploring the rest of your work.