All Comments on 'The Will of the Gods Ch. 01'

I hope there is more to come! Moonbeam creates a fantasy world of medieval technologies, an insecure princess, a confident rival prince, kidnap plots and royal arrogance... Oh, and the prince plays the princess like a piano. I wonder if she will wind up loving the domination, or if she will establish her equality (as she sought at the beginning).

I hope it is not too long to the next installment.

Don't like slave stories. It makes me feel sick and I really can't get into it.

Ugh... Owning someone..? And having a ceremony that means they'll never be free again? God...

I’ve never really read slave stories but I REALLY like this one. That being said the Will of the Gods thing makes me super uneasy. It’s still very well written though, I’ll continue to read it.

I hope she hasn't been broken so easily, though.

Looking forward to more.

I started on chapter 5 and had to go back to read the entire series. Great use of imagery with refreshingly well-rounded characters. The writing beautifully balances a storyline with a healthy dose of eroticism. While I enjoy power games, I'm not usually a fan a slavery. With that said, our lady friend knows what it means to be a royal, so I'm not sure if slavery will suit her long. I can't wait to see how she resolves her dueling desires for power and submission; how long her master will restrain himself; and what this means for her home kingdom.

Well-done @PrincessMoonbeam - Please don't keep us waiting!

Can't wait to read on!

i want her(regina bitch) to suffer

Hmmm... confused about why Gregar didn't just go to the King's bedroom and assassinate him afer infiltrating the castle, but rather chose to go to bedroom of (not so nice) Princess? I guess he wants a personal fuck toy more than the kingdom. But what am I thinking? This is erotica and not a thesis on military strategy. Well written! I love the way her eyes dilated as she looked up at him. However, I didn't get the sense that he has the hots for her

Oh yeah, I meant to add that I don't know why people bitching that the story is centered around slavery as the writer clearly disclosed this by using the "slavery" tag. Read the tags before you read the story people!

I don't get this story. No man who actually cares for a woman would humiliate her in this way. WTF!!!

I just read the Achen Enforcer and this ridiculous story was recommended afterwards. I think Literotica should double check their algorithm. I've only read this one chapter but there is so much wrong with this story I'm really amazed at the ratings

Hmmm...first time I'm reading a story in which the Princess is written as not beautiful, or even pretty - but Gregar is hot and he's clearly not taken with her. He treats her so poorly - not sure where this is going.

Boy you got hit by the PC police. They need to look at the tags and move on. I'm rating this a 5 so they commenter above can see why you rate high. Ridiculous preachy comments. Good job on this story.

Foolish, naive girl! No man likes that- I can't see how this will end happily

This story is kinda dumb - why are they both written as idiots?

Weird - why the fuck should I care about a princess who is a masochist and that no one else cares about -per the author