by noodneighbor
You certainly can't be accused of writing a lame assed story! This is gritty, but makes riveting reading! Hopefully, part 3 is coming soon!
The thing is there is no Bi category. A lot of us are just tuning into the gay lifestyle at a late age. Also, write a hot story Dude! Don't complain, explain! Those of us new at this could use some pointers and for many of us it is about excitement and sex, there is a Romance category if that's what you are looking for.
Dont let all the wana be cridics trll you your story is bad. The only thing they cand do is piss and mone, well if u dont like is tough. And to you the author and all the fans. I like it, its a slow starter but I have no doubt it will get better, Im going to stick with it and should to.
P.S sorry about the spelling the checker was not woking
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I am anxious to see where this will be going next. I believe you have the beginning of a very hot story here!
The story ended just at the bit I would have really enjoyed, the Cock Sucking that is; due to the age of this story I assume there will be no continuation, which is a shame as you have a good style of writing, just not enough MM Cock Sucking for my personal taste.