by Carnal_Flower
A very well written story. The relationship between dad and daughter is great.
"I can't believe I got all of you inside me," she whispered, as she felt him thicken and swell in her hand. "Mmmm . . . inside me, Daddy." That's what I said, too. It really is quite surprising and very arousing when it happens--when all of him goes all the way inside. My pussy was sucking him in and clinching him so much, he almost couldn't control himself.
What a great story. So very well written, the descriptions were ideal. It was a true romantic novel with the Daddy/daughter twist to make it erotic. Thank you for sharing it.
A lovely story where more could be written.
The written dialogue between both were sparsely written, I guess the reader must make assumptions. Would love to read more about them
There is no comment I could make which would be as good as this story merits. Complete. Lacking nothing. Perfect in every way.
This is the best story on this site! I’ll be reading a lot more from you.
I love this story. My still favorite is The Politician's Daughter. But you are the best writer on this site! I hope you continue! The best to you!
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I've read this before, and thought it was cool. Then read Daughter's Tale, and decided to read all your stuff. Now I remember you.
Not a fan of stories where everyone is successful and rich, but it's still well done.
One of your story tags is "bears". That tickles me greatly. Pushed me to 5 yellow pointy things.
"Bears"...
I love you. ^.^
I'm SO glad to see you finally submitted a story :) You always capture me with your work. This one is yet another "great one" for the genre and for romance. I hope to see a lot more in the future! Thanks for sharing this! <3
I LOVED this story. The build up was intense, the descriptions were perfect, and it wasn't a long boring story.
Thank you!!
Once again... artful writing, rich and likable characters with strong foundations, impassioned romance, and of course hot, illicit, unforgivably inappropriate sex. You captured what life is all about, and what everyone wants, even if they don't know it.
Keep up the excellent and inspired work. The world needs more authors like you.
I got to the end of this story thinking about how great it was and that I wanted to read more from this author. I was so surprised and happy to see it was you! I love your writing please continue!!
I loved this story, and the story hasn't ended... I'm looking forward to more... Thank You!
Glad to see you're submissions once again,you still got it!
Another delicious father/daughter story...PLEASE give us plenty MORE......
All fathers and daughters should experience such uninhibited love. Max and Casey are so lucky they have each other.