All Comments on 'The Winter War Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
keep at it man

should finish it man, its pretty good. Your characters are sort of archetypes at the moment but youll flesh them out in time. Pretty good D&D comfort food for this genre, would love to see how you end this story and even continue it

kilroy_ccxivkilroy_ccxivabout 11 years agoAuthor

I apologize for how long it's taking me to get the story written. I have been without a computer with a decent internet connection for some time now, and my stories as of currently, have all been written on my phone, and I'm not quite happy with all of the spelling and grammatical errors that I've made, brought about because of trying to type on a tiny keypad and reviewing on a miniscule screen. However I do plan on finishing the series hopefully in the near future, and I hope you all enjoy the following chapters.

Thank you,

Kilroy.

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