All Comments on 'The Witch and the Dragon Ch. 08'

This had a very promising start. However now I seem to doubt the characters. Alluna was so naive and trapped in a tower. Then Zak comes along and saves her. She grows and finds herself and he finally lets go of the demons that haunt him. Until now, now he OWNS her? She has to call him Master and once again her choices are taken from her. He gave her freedom in the same breath took it all away. I'm hoping that this problem is fixed in the upcoming chapters.

But Irish-lass, that is the nature of dominants. They like control, and based on her reactions, she's a natural born submissive. Great story by the way! Lovin' it!!!! (:

hello... why are you so adamant on wasting a wonderful story line..