All Comments on 'The Witch and the Dragon Ch. 20'

by LevanaHyll

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katgoddess1katgoddess1over 11 years ago
Yuck! Dragon gerns!

What is he doing? He may just be trying to keep her warmer at high altitudes, but how does this help her air supply?

HimalayandewHimalayandewover 11 years ago
Beaming with smile

Happy to see that everybody is getting together specially Lucien and ,Zak and remi,s father too.And also that Alluna has recovered some of her memories back and that zak has finally embraced his dragon too. Now i,m only waiting for them to get safely back to Alpha 7 and get over with this war as soon as possible .It is good to see that you made this chapter longer than the previous one ,which is as captivating as others.Keep with up with good work and please try to post the next one as soon as possible ;)

LevanaHyllLevanaHyllover 11 years agoAuthor
Dragon Germs?

Lol! He kisses her with that mouth. Just because he's in dragon form makes no difference. It's still our Zak... Just bigger and beastlier lmao.

KyriaeKyriaeover 11 years ago
sigh

thank you for this i have been waiting impatiently for this. its good that zak has accepted his dragon so now the reall fun can begin

SweetRapunzelSweetRapunzelover 11 years ago
LMAO

Dude Luke, talking about making an entrance!!

"In the middle of the field, striding toward the golden dragon was a tall blond man. The way he walked seemed familiar to Zak. His eyes narrowed on the man with the golden hair, but a mask made of metal covered his face. A dark cape fluttered behind him. He put his hand on the dragon's snout, speaking to him." LOL really cracking me up here. Luke sound like a hero to rescue, only black leather pants are missing. Great chapter luv. Kinda a bit amusing with Luna's and Rowi's dad wanted to kill their son in law. Luna should tell her dad the truth about her two steph sisters so he will start to get smart. He seems a bit dense to me. Any how good that Zak is finally in sync with his dragon. Luke is still a sadist jealous prick though. I really hope his girl is a Dom. will serve him right for all the shit he does to his brother and Seth and Luna and Zak. So Zak keep Luna safe in his mouth. I hope he doesn't have bad breath LOL.Gave you 5 * luvey ^_______^

SweetRapunzelSweetRapunzelover 11 years ago
Btw

like your twist on little red ridinghood kinda like sexy catholic school girl there. Maybe she is Luke's mate? Feel like she will give Luke as good as she get.

LevanaHyllLevanaHyllover 11 years agoAuthor
Apologies...

Haven't been able to post or write for the past few weeks. It seems like my relatives are dropping like flies. Three uncles have passed away and I just found out that one of my cousins daughters just up and died last night. She was only 31, so this has taken us all by surprise. I just need some time to let this shock and sadness pass. I'm really sorry. But I promise to finish this. Just need a break to get myself and my head back together.

acucaracucarover 11 years ago

Totally dying waiting for the next chapter! Love this series. Such a fascinating world you've created and I find myself wanting to know more and more about each character and the relationships they've formed. I'm already attached to the unborn babies and hoping you'll be telling their stories too! :D

ladybug71ladybug71over 11 years ago
I am sorry to hear.....

about your relatives passing away, LevanaHyll!! You have my deepest sympathies! Your stories are amazing; your characters have depth and personalities to them; you pull your readers in and I just love it all!! Thank you for sharing your gift of storytelling to us!!

LevanaHyllLevanaHyllover 11 years agoAuthor
Final chapter...

Monday morning a little past midnight, I finally uploaded the last chapter of W&D. I guess between Wednesday and Friday it should post. Thanks to all who've voted and commented. I really appreciated all the support. Though I plan on taking a long vacation from writing, I do plan on coming back, maybe the begining of the new year. Once again thanks to everyone and if you get the chance, read the other stories of this series. This story will be available for purchase in about a month or so. Tata' for now...LH.

WickedwrathchildWickedwrathchildover 11 years ago
Dont leave for to long.

I love youre stories. I hope you have a good vacation even Stephen King does. Well hope to see youre writings soon. Luv U Levana.

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