All Comments on 'The Witching Hour Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
damn

it is getting good. cant wait for chapter 3.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
really good start

keep it coming

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Improving

You started out strong, and you are starting to hit your stride. The story is getting more and more compelling. Keep up the good work and draw us even farther into your world!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Hurry up with 3!

These are excellent in both story progression and good ol' descriptive sexiness

pramblingspramblingsover 15 years ago
can"t wait for more

I am absolutely hooked! Great storyline and movement within the story to give character depth.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
uhhhh...What...

happened to the guy at the door?

ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 2 years ago

Well, all of that was quite disturbing. I'm so disappointed that Britt is not an ally, but a harnessed enemy slave. I may not finish reading the rest of this now. It had potential in the beginning.

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