by angeljack
You started out strong, and you are starting to hit your stride. The story is getting more and more compelling. Keep up the good work and draw us even farther into your world!
These are excellent in both story progression and good ol' descriptive sexiness
I am absolutely hooked! Great storyline and movement within the story to give character depth.
Well, all of that was quite disturbing. I'm so disappointed that Britt is not an ally, but a harnessed enemy slave. I may not finish reading the rest of this now. It had potential in the beginning.