All Comments on 'The Wolf and the Mirror'

What a lyrical flow of words! You have a gift, sir.

Sorry, a great story does not deserve such a bad pun. Your name or pen- name reminds me of Hofstadter. Have you read any of his stuff? Any chance of another chapter?

Yes. Good catch. Many references to Goedel, Escher, Bach in there. It was a self-reference to a self-referential strange loop. Also my name.

It was my first writing attempt at fiction so dont know about another chapter yet.

The reality of Literotica is that the majority of submissions are not erotic, and they are certainly not literature. To my mind, this story fully merits consideration on both counts. The combination of elegant language, of description, and of leitmotifs which sustain the narative and give it depth, offer a singular beauty which is rare on these forums; moreover, the literary influences you acknowledge are employed creatively and with skill.

I hope you will go on to write more; you are, without question, worth reading.

I'm really glad you enjoyed it. It was a pleasure to write. I expanded this narrative into a book if you ever want a deeper dive into the mind of the narrator. https://www.amazon.com/Blown-Glass-Farmhands-Dominance-Submission-ebook/dp/B07VW9PZTX/

Wow! Such a wonderful erotic, sensual, lustful well written story. Just wow! Bravo!