by evelynarize
Very good, but you cant stop there. You have to continue very soon, please.
Damn! This has me dripping, but you are such a tease! 😉 Please, don't deny us the juicy finish. You have a very gifted writing style. More please! 😀
I loved it even though you left me unfulfilled at the end, Please continue this story! I want to see where you take this.
That is so sensual and so erotic, it's like we're there... I hope there is more...to come... Thanks for sharing!!!
Nice introduction to the characters, but stopped at a bad place. Continue, please
Not much s suction, just a great story and fast moving tale