All Comments on 'The Woman-King Ch. 02'

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dreamcatcher7dreamcatcher7over 17 years ago
wow

this was great. Thankyou

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Thanks....

Good writing,

I almost skipped over this story because it was identified as SciFI.

This was such a sensuous story to read, your building of the characters and their friendship made it easy to imagine the intensity of their pleasure.

Your mix of strength with a sensuous feminine touch made this a truly excellent erotic story.

Thanks for a breath of fresh air in your story approach.

However, I'd so love to see you write another variation set in modern times. :-)

v/r

Beth in California

PrincessErinPrincessErinabout 16 years ago
Very Hot

A very hot sex scene. It was good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Very good story

...Brenis-Lir has a cousin...heh heh heh...and she is not a nice lady.

KarensClit1990KarensClit1990over 5 years ago
Disappointed

Because it’s in the wrong category.

It’s not Sci-Fi & Fantasy primarily—it’s Lesbian.

I feel tricked.

I fully read the stories because I love your other stories, especially: Not Your Type Series.

And your a fellow 🇨🇦 Yeah!

I couldn’t really get into it because it’s not a story I’d typically read.

Plus there wasn’t a love story that would have at least levelled the story so I could also appreciate it.

Please reconsider your categories in the future, if I’m so fortunate to read another.

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