All Comments on 'The Woman on the Twelfth Green Ch. 02'

I thought the first part of this series was wonderful, but I do believe the second installment is even better. I don't expect a third, but I would love to read it. Bravo! Bravissimo!

It is always a pleasure to read stories from Carrtuen. This was as good as 'Going Home' and quite well written with very few errors. If all writing was this good on Lit, I'd probably be in permanent reading mode. A definite page turner and not one to be dismissed after the first few paragraphs.

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This story could have gone off the rails in several places. Thanks for resisting and giving us a nice romance piece with the right ending.

Good story... Should add one or two more chapters in series showing complications and adjustment for three way relationship in modern times

As sexy as this story started, I was squegged out by the lack of communication and the disrespect shown by Kiersten in flat out telling her fiance what was going to happen, and then having sex with her female lover without discussion. There was no foundation laid that indicated that this cheating would be okay. Rather than portraying engaged behavior, the way she acts is like occasional friends with benefits that are non-exclusive. What's to prevent her from fucking whoever she wants in the future regardless of what he says. A committed relationship shows care and concern for the feelings of the partner or spouse. I couldn't finish the story.

I didn't expect the arrival of a third party. Good story.

His fiancee, his supposed "soulmate" unilaterally dec