All Comments on 'The Word Ch. 01'

I've read both of your submissions to Literotica, and look forward to reading many more.You have a fine way with the language,many a pleasing turn of phrase that makes an exciting offer of future satisfactions. I'm sure you'll have many admiring readers

Excellent beginning. Usually, we see more than the opening paragraphs. WHEN WILL WE SEE MORE?

M' gawd, you are some writer. I was left breathless by this story. Please, more. If I were to have a complaint about it, it would be with the (few) misspellings. You might want to use "taut" nipples, rather than "taught" nipples. But then, they just might have been "taught" :) Still and all, that's not enough to throw a 75 at you. So, here's my comment. Keep going.