All Comments on 'The Work Wife'

There's a lot of hot mileage in a theme like this. Well done and thank you.

Hottttt !

That was hot!

Your build up was top notch. I liked the small steps, especially the shoulder massages. I also appreciated the raw lust in their final coupling.

I do wish that you'd continued with the small steps for a while longer. A quick rub, a glance at a nipple, their first kiss. Those naughty steps really built up the sexual tension. 5 stars, thanks!

I just discovered this story by chance, and it is a gem. Wonderful buildup, and the joint seduction works beautifully. Great job. Five stars from me. JB

Now I gotta Jack off again! 5 Stars!

That was seriously erotic! Not a word wasted, enough to make me think I was there. Such good writing is rare - thank you!

But we got pretty close. Then we had to stop and the pain I felt was unreal, savage.

16 years later I still miss her.