All Comments on 'The World Beneath The Waves Ch. 02'

Sweet

Your writing is quite well done a testament to meticulous editing I'm sure. I would like to say however that, while I understand the length of time writing takes, the length if your chapters leaves something to be desired . Maybe having more external dialogue or detail to the surrounding area to use as " filler" if you will, or add another characters internal musings not just those of the main character. Pleas take this as constructive criticism and in no way offensive.

Great story, I look forward to reading more. You have a fan.

Reminds me, a little bit, of a book I read long ago entitled: Aquarius Mission

by Martin Caidin.

All who liked this story may want to read it.

Great start with lots of possibilities!

Keep going.