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Elliana made her leave swiftly, the door closing behind her, leaving him to his thoughts at last as he looked out of the window, the view of the city was most spectacular, though part of him still believed that this had to be some sort of hallucination or waking fantasy, the rational part of his brain assured him otherwise.
He was here, really here, and only time would tell if he would be able to get home or not.
If that was one thing, he now found himself with the additional problem of this maiden that would no doubt soon be sent to him...though he was certain of himself that he would be unable to deny her beauty, could he really find it in himself to indulge in such a thing?
So soon, if at all? They were clearly of a different species, would they even be compatible?
Had Elliana assumed that he would be anatomically equipped in the same manner as their males?
He sat upon the edge of the bed, his head in his hands, almost beginning to ache through the sheer amount of data he was trying to process all at once.
Then he heard it, a sound that would herald a night of either bliss, ease of mind, or a most awkward hostility, a knock upon the door of his chamber...
~ To be continued.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 9 years agoReminds me, a little bit, of a book I read long ago entitled: Aquarius Mission
by Martin Caidin.
All who liked this story may want to read it.
Great start with lots of possibilities!
Keep going.
Yourang20about 9 years agoYour writing is quite well done a testament to meticulous editing I'm sure. I would like to say however that, while I understand the length of time writing takes, the length if your chapters leaves something to be desired . Maybe having more external dialogue or detail to the surrounding area to use as " filler" if you will, or add another characters internal musings not just those of the main character. Pleas take this as constructive criticism and in no way offensive.
