All Comments on 'The World Possessed Pt. 04'

How can he "survive" all three of them!?!? hehe

As an erotica no doubt this part is good. But as a story you're doing a major mistake of turning every woman into a goddess. There should be some difference between the powers of each, and you should actually decide yourself how much powers you want to give to who. Then you should keep yourself bound to the system. In fiction writing the world you have the freedom to create nature laws, but then need to abide yourself by the laws you've created yourself. If in every chapter you bring more and more new things, the story then feels absurd and unreal.