All Comments on 'The Worship: Caroline & Brendan'

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 15 years ago
Two souls united as one

Only can a son and his mother really connect as one soul. Once reunited they will have what no one can really experence, unless the male was born from the female. .......

.... A very good story with sweet passion of lust combined with true love. Thanks ........Rich

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
YES

NOTHING better than mommies fucking their sons...........

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Very Good

Makes me wish I was Brendan.Love these type of mother and son stories.

txcoatl1970txcoatl1970almost 12 years ago
XXXCellent story!

I love a horny m/s encounter where they conceive a kid in a transcendental happy melding of souls as you wrote it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
why do ladies write the best, most beautiful stories...

of hot motherfucking? This is a truly lovely tale of a boy doing what plenty of boys--and their moms!--would love to have happen: slide their stiff young prick up their mother's mommy-hole and empty their sperm-laden balls up the same cunt they came out of. Brendan and his mom are truly married in spirit, he's his mother's well-built young husband and Caroline's her boy's mature voluptuous bride. Like any young groom Brendan's wild to plow his bride's precious twat over and over again, if he could he'd keep his big stiff prick permanently planted up his mother's cozy cunt up to his balls. When he unloads his potent young balls up his mommy's loving coochie--a mother's coochie is the natural home for what her boy's got waiting for his mom in his heavy balls--mother and son find that he's fucked a baby up his own mother's cunt. A cute little incest-baby, his own little sister or brother! Brendan is sure one proud young motherfucker, and his mom is prouder than ever of her big manly boy and his fertile young balls.

mafia_patriarchmafia_patriarchover 10 years ago

Grammar was a little wonky and the syntax awkward. Why did her name briefly change to Sarah? Did no one else see that?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Low expectations

High ratings here are a surprise that can only come from low expectations being met.. Aside from the grammar, syntax woes, and the Caroline/Sarah debacle, this story does not flow well & could use the services of a rewrite and a good editor.

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