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All Comments on 'The Wrong Room'

by shorfrue

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Nice twist

To know she knew you were there the whole time, wow a perfect fantasy

ReiDeBastosReiDeBastosabout 9 years ago
Loved the ending!

I hope the story continues...

DimRealityDimRealityabout 9 years ago
Do go on!

I would love to read a sequal! I only ask that they learn each other's names in the next bit to cut down on the neutral references. Overall great writing, I can't wait for your next piece!!

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