All Comments on 'The Wrong Thing To Do'

This was just a really good story. I hope that you will be writing more.

A good, hot story that can stand alone, but with characters who just barely are developed and seem to have great potential. I too hope you'll continue this story.

PLEASE ADD MORE CHAPTERS...

you weave a good story, but your description of the sex acts lacks any hint of the exquisite pleasures one enjoys during foreplay and coitis.It's more of a wham bam thankyou maam story. Work on it-gain some knowledge.

Good idea, simple, to the point. I enjoyed it.

I think it was great, it had good twists and I see how the character is naturally good but was briefly misguided doing “the wrong thing.” Forget the negatives improve on it and write a second chapter pleaaase?