All Comments on 'The Yearbook Girl Ch. 01'

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AthaliaAthaliaabout 10 years ago
Cute story!

I like the way you take your time getting to the sex play, while holding out the promise by the third paragraph and titillating the reader with the prospect all through the story. The twist is that they end up not making love at all, but we get to know who they are as people. Looking forward to part two!

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