All Comments on 'The Yellow Dress Ch. 02'

If YOU REALLY Wanted to find a way to give Salvo and Beth a Happy Ending, You WOULD Find It.

I wouldn't know how you could manage a happy ending from here. But I do believe in you and you have my support .

Actually now that I thought about it there's a couple of different ways you can end it. P.m. me if you're interested . Some of it might be pretty schmaltzy though . Or outlandish as fuck

This story was so beautiful. But I felt betrayed as the reader when you allowed Salvo to nearly be killed without a good resolution. This is not fair to your audience. I cannot rest until Beth is back is the arms of Salvo and they are walking off happily into the sunset. I mean it. Please finish the story and let it be a happy ending.

What? That's it? Don't leave us hanging! Salvo needs to hear that Beth loves him. :( There are a lot of possible things that can happen to them in the future. Please let them be together!! Pretty please? As cliche as this sounds, I want them to be happy together. What about Salvo's Nonna? I hope Beth can meet her. I hope you continue this series. It's so interesting that I've probable read the first part about 5times now lol. Plus you haven't really answered most of my questions last chapter lol

With other commenters please continue this has been a refreshing story and you could run another few chapters with it. Lol FIND A WAY xx

I have a really good idea for an ending. It might not be happy with them together, but it will be realistic. I will send yout a messays with my idea. And it will be a happy, realistic ending for Beth. I loved this chapter.

If you don't think readers are not going to hate this ending and you by association! The ending in truth came too quick, it was predictable but too soon, that's where the shock lies!

You had a good thing going, Salvo as a character had loads of mileage, his back story had tons of potential, it's a shame you didn't exploit this more.

I agree with the others that this story is actually very good. But not done. Salvo is alive. Let the police do what they must. Let Beth come to terms with who she is with Salvo. Give them a chance. Please.

Whether it's a happy ending or not, I don't think this story is finished. Please give us a proper ending.

Omg...this is just the beginning! Don't listen to the crap comments. This is a great story..PLEASE continue!!!

I never comment on here but I am begging you to write another chapter. This was great but felt so far from an ending. Beth seemed like she was willing to get to know him and Salvo was finally talking to her and opening up. Please give us more!

Make it a happy ending. Why not? There is much in the world that is not happy already. Give Beth & Salvo a happy ending. Really beautifull story. This story should have a great ending. So much unspoken? Like why were they going to kill her in the bgeinning. And what was the fight with the tall Italian about? Beth telling Salto she loves him back...come on...

let's see...kidnapping and forcible rape. Long term physical and psychological torture. And some how people are talking about a happy ending? What the fuck. This isn't even remotely believable. If anything, Beth should have dug a finger into the bullet wound to exact a little painful retribution.

Shit!!:)) They both were warming up to each other....the ice had almost melted away....then this abrupt tragedy tears them apart from each other?!...

Agreed that a gangster's life hangs by a thread....its not easy not to look back in anger,hurt amd rage at one's own rape and torture......

But maybe you could have made them lead each other way away from past traumas,romantically..gently into a golden sunshine of happy,winning domestic bliss!!;))...its a story you know.......

This isn't the end of the story, right?

Seriously, you're doing a great job. Even if you don't want it to end in a fairy tale, happily ever after way, this story still needs closure. Please give us that.

This story will play out how you, the author (not the commenters), want it to. You're doing well with the story arc, so go with your gut and get us some more chapters :)

If you did not want a happy ending you could of just killed him off or had him rot in prison or better yet. Left him disabled from the waist down

This series is very well done. You covered Beth's emotions and feelings almost as if you had lived them. On your bio page you say that The Yellow Dress is darker than your other stories. You do well with the darker side. Dark stories allow for conflicted emotions and have a tendency to have split reader feelings. Some will al

ys want a happy ending and the other half will want to see the abducter get punished and the victim get a chance to have her life recover and for her to move on.

With your talent I would like to see you write one last chapter for The Yellow Dress. Continue with Beth resuming her sessions with her counselor and working thru how she could have the mixed feelings for Salvo. She seems smart enough to recognize life with him would not be happy ever after and to know that it is not unusual to have feelings for the person who not only used her but also kept her alive and even at times showing tenderness.

Even without another chapter this story was excellent and I look forward to reading more from you.

I want more of this story !!!

Will you write more of this story? I'd like to read more. Also, i love all of your stories.

My email is vmayer77@yahoo.com

I like the ending. I think it's B's that every story needs a happy ending. I like how muddy and complicated this is cause that honestly feels more realistic

This story is breathtaking to me, it makes me feel, actually feel...not many authors can do that. And although it has ended, I am hungry for more.

Why???!!!!! I was SO much hoping for a happy ending.

Very enjoyable story I hope you decide to add another chapter to allow for an ending

That plot twist though.

I love that you may continue this story if we readers successfully convince you!

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I can't believe I'm worried about Salvo, but I am. I thought I hated him, but I'm starting to care about him, want him to be happy with her, want the both to be happy with each other. Is there no way for the story to continue with a realistic happy ending? Please continue...

I'm still hoping for the next update 🥺👉👈

H'mmmm... I hope you tease us. You certainly have the skill to.

Please please, say you're just teasing. You have a very very nice story here, you cannot just it like that. Please continue.

You're sadistic for that lack of an ending.

This is a nice if unusual ending. You don't have anyplace to take this story where you can improve it, I expect. Time for your next effort? Good luck in any event.

Brooooo you gotta have another part like how could he die

A captivating, well-written story that, I think, needs a conclusion. This is a good place to stop Part 2, though. Realistically, any enemies Salvo has know about Beth now, so him giving her up wouldn't protect her. She needs to grow into her role of being his woman, and he could grow beyond keeping her as a pet. A HFN is where I would leave things. Cheers!