All Comments on 'The Young Boy'

I have imagined just this scenerio many times and often wondered.... Thanks for writing this story. Makes me even more curious.

Jody

I found I had a little bit of difficulty working out when you switched views, but only for the first scentence. Otherwise it was a very hot scene, the spreaders, the cuffs, being face fucked, I really liked that you did get in the point of view from both the boy and th Dom. So Hot!

Oh fuck that is so hot! My cock is impossibly hard as I tie my ballsack and stretch it. My balls are so swollen. Dreaming of your cock pushing into me, stretching me with your warm hardness, possessing me.

Magnificent scenario and dialogue.

wishing more stories,always looked for something like that tomfi66@gmail.com

I love your story and I think you're a great writer. Please email me at irishlad7133@gmail.com

You switched point of view halfway through. Might I suggest proofreading?

An appealing and tempting turn on tale