All Comments on 'The Young Man Next Door Ch. 02'

I love this theme and your pacing is perfect. Don't rush it, draw the saga out and keep making us crazy.

I can't wait for the 3rd chapter. Please keep I real and believable, there are too many stories on here that lose the realness over time.

You are a good writer.

Looking forward to more instalments

Welcome to Lit ChesterWJones! and welcome to writing. I'm enjoying your first story on Lit. You've done a nice job of setting up a good story line. There are some areas that you could improve in your writing and develop for your characters, but all in all a good beginning. I hope you continue with your story. Best of luck.

Apple

I don't read where her age or maturity have anything to do with the plot, are they supposed to? Especially if you are going to develop a timid weak husband who seeks self humiliation, and feels inadequate to be a competent sex partner for his wife, then this is definitely a psychological dysfunction like a fetish.

So far well written, capturing the wife's desire for a more masculine sex partner, the young man enamored with his first pussy, even if its aged, and the pervert husband throwing his wife to superior lovers. Great tension and drama.

cuck shit.