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sexydad50sexydad50over 7 years ago
Really?

Hard to take this with any seriousness with not just one , but multiple "OOHLALA" s.

Juvenile.

PegasusRyderPegasusRyderover 7 years ago
Fun to read

Sexydad50, I assume "OOHLALA" was used to show just how "juvenile" the character in the story was.

The story was fun to read,especially from someone older. Interesting how the story plays with the idea of BDSM. I look forward to reading the next installment,

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Sublime

I found this to be very erotic and interesting. What a turn on it was to watch the playfulness unfold to serious want and need. You are an excellent scene setter! Great dabble into D/s! :)

LH82LH82almost 5 years ago
Wow

Loved this story. Connects with me. Wish I was her....

zivia3zivia3almost 5 years ago
Also hot!

Ditto. Would love to be her, with you sucking cunt juices off my fingers!

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Reader/Writer (sometimes). I like to write stories that have sexual encounters, not porno scenes from beginning to end.

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