All Comments on 'The Younger Girlfriend'

by TheKingofNod

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Wow

What a story. I'm not much of a reader, but I couldn't put this down. Great writing.

Peter_Peter_about 11 years ago
Not near up to the quality of your previous stories

frankly I didn't even think this story made sense. The flow was jerky, the scenes seemingly unrelated. All and all not a very good effort.

Your previous stories however were great! Would love to see more writing like those

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