All Comments on 'The Youth'

Hot sex scene but plots a bit thin .

The story is nice, but the glaring pubic hair bits are off putting, just omitting the body hair reference would leave it to the reader's imagination, giving you wider viewrship.

It's also historically inaccurate, concubines were often waxed completely as a part of their beuty regime, everywhere from china to the ottoman empire.

Good story. Too bad you haven't written more. A minor criticism: the word you should of used was ravish, not ravage.