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All Comments on 'Their Unintentional Unicorn Pt. 01'

by xxxalyssarosexxx

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
take your time

Good start, but don't post until you have a chance to develop the story and characters

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
This isn’t even a story

You should try actually writing more than an intro

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
good start

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