All Comments on 'Them'

by SirJaerls

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andtheendandtheendalmost 14 years ago
Congratulations

Your story was chosen for highlighting in the Story Feedback section under the ANDTHEEND thread, post #261.

I gave you a 5 vote for your effort.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Why was it necessary for her to call herself names in the process of begging for her release? It added nothing and detracted from the flow of the scene.

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