All Comments on 'TheRapist'

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I kinda liked it, it wasn't to bad

That was sooo HOT! It was excellently written. I'm still panting. I loved every bit of it (although I guessed it was the therapist at the beginning). It had a great build up and the climax (no pun intended) definitely didn't disappoint. I hope you write more in this category...and soon.

This was quite well written and had some good points that it made but I would hope that this was just a fantasty. For this to realley happen it would defintively be rape as far as im concerned

A few misused words and a few typos but all in all, a good fiction piece. You should be proud and happy about your work. Great job!

Rape does take place in real life and it is fair to acknowledge this but it is not fair to justify it. I partiuclarly dislike stories which justify the rape of very young women by older men on the grounds that the girls "really" enjoy it which so far from the truth. What makes this story worse is that the man is in a position of trust in relation to the victim.

To the previous poster...If you don't like non-consent, don't read non-consent. It's fantasy, not real life. Yes, it is a person that her parents trust but is it not statistically true that most victims know and trust their attackers? There's real life if you're looking for it! And I'm not justifying anything, I'm telling a story! I think that rape is wrong. But reading and writing fake stories is exciting to me. Sorry! BTW, I could have written it as complete non-consentual rape if that would have made you happy. But I didn't want to. Because I'm the author and I can do that.

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To everyone else not living in a dream world: Thanks for your feedback-good and bad. You rock!

...spoiled by quite a few silly errors. Tighten up on your language and spelling and you will be good. On the whole very well done. Keep writing!

Very hot. You have a gift for erotica, please keep writing!

I'm not sure why some posters acted so upset, Allison, clearly enjoyed the experiance.

I like this story ! well written too.

The end felt a little rushed other than that it was great!

I would love a man to creep into my house tie me up and rape me all night

I love love love it!

However i think some people need to pull their heads out of there buts, i dont believe the author said this is a true story or im making light of rape anywhere!

This is a fantasy piece, and as far as im concerned one of the very beat ive ever read. Although you should forget the ending so you can write morel just saying :) lol

You can clearly write a good story but it would be better for the reader if she didn't give in so easily I think, if you developed his character a bit more and she proved to be somewhat more feisty.