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Click hereMy brother and Nate had already started shouting out orders, not that many were needed -- the remaining soldiers and Wardens had been on alert, packed and ready to go at a moment's notice since we had assumed we'd be fighting the Architect hopefully sooner rather than later.
"How many darkspawn does he have, to have taken two patrols with Wardens?" I worried. "Assuming that's what happened to them."
Alistair wrapped his arms around me, nuzzling my cheek reassuringly. "Doesn't matter. We've got two more patrols headed their way, in addition to us and all the soldiers under Nate's command. We'll rescue them if they've been taken, and kill the Architect too. I swear it."
I clung to him for a brief moment, trying to absorb his confidence and make it my own; finally I pulled away. "I love you." I went up on tiptoes to press a kiss to the corner of his mouth. "Let's go kick some ass."
He laughed, and I sprinted away to put on my armour and pack the few things we didn't have ready to go, leaving him with Aedan to arrange our immediate departure.
- COMMENTS
ElyssaCouslandover 5 years agoAuthorI think you are forgetting that this is chapter 141 of a much larger story. The rating comes from people who've also read the previous 140 chapters, many of which include sex scenes. The readers are following me rather than favorite-ing each chapter. There are currently almost 800,000 words total in the story - it isn't my fault (or the readers') that this site doesn't allow multi-chapter stories to update as part of one file rather than making each chapter a new 'story'.
Anonymousover 5 years agoA story with a rating of 4.96, that is comprised of roughly 3600 words, has no sex scenes and that has acquired just one favourite.
This is the highest rated Celeb and Fan Fiction story on the site?
Makes no sense at all.
