All Comments on 'There and Back Again Ch. 018'

Another chapter. Since I was previously unfamiliar with the game, I've felt at a disadvantage as I read, so my annoyance finally drove me to Wikipedia for some background. Congratulations on writing so well that even someone as clueless as me can be engaged by and enjoy your story. Do wish the chapters were longer, though. This one felt like a teaser for a real chapter to follow. There was much less interaction or dialogue with Irving or other minor characters almost as if it was just a game level you needed to pass but didn't find challenging.

I love this series!!! One thing though, the girl that helped Bowen was not a mage. She was a templar trainee or a priestess. Not that it really matters. Please continue soon! And thank you very much.

I am just amazed how much this story has captured my attention. It is wonderful! A truly excellent job by an excellent writer. I am so happy there is so much to go still!!

I can't say how much I'm enjoying this story. Two days and I've almost blown through the story.

I didn't even realise until now how much I was enjoying reading until I remembered that this is Lit, and I haven't been reading for the sex.

Great job!