All Comments on 'There and Back Again Ch. 043-044'

Oh thank god they finally did it. Well done by the way.

I am not sure why you seemed to be avoiding writing a sex scene into your story for so long. Perhaps you were just waiting for what you felt was the right time. I will tell you this though, you write great sex. You put me in their head-space feeling their emotions. Good work..

Thank you for making the RPG game's world accessible for a non-gamer, and also for the sweet /spicy romantic developments. Looking forward to more.

I have been binge reading this and I'm so glad it finally happened this story is amazing I can't wait to read more!!!

...for them to finally have sex. Slowest (and most intense) buildup I've ever seen. Great work.

Are we finally over the awkward part

Now and they can just fuck the living daylight

Out of each other

*When it finally settled, he collapsed down onto me, swooping down to kiss me with bruising force.*

ALISTAIR IS SWOOPING!!! Swooping is bad...

Alistair the bad boy? Cant see it.