by ElyssaCousland
It is ALL excellent and interesting, but the five stars are really for the last paragraphs starting with " He looked so tired". Loved it!
Eclectic Reader
It seemed no matter which of the two ruled, Orzammar ended up sucking to some degree. Bhelen was rewarded for backstabbing with an ego that thought he could do anything or Harrowmont tried to act honorably and ended up making horrible choices for the sake of politics.
Even returning with the third child of the Dwarven King and being made Paragon didn't help a lot.
I liked your end better, thank you.
I know I'm nitt-picking, but where in the dwarf capitol, which is currently sealed, did everyone find dress clothes that fit? Find dresses and tunics and the like in one day? That aside I very much enjoy the story so far. Interesting take on the original story.