All Comments on 'There is a First Time for Everything'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
again with no proofreading. why?

causing her nipples to swell and harden as he rolled the casually between his large finger and thumb.

George grunted loudly as he unloaded into his new bribe

"What were you doing, or should I grass you up to Mum & Dad?"

"This mad Lisa I had better go,"

Shady_LadyShady_Ladyalmost 7 years agoAuthor
Dear Anonymous

No proofreading because at the time I didn't have an editor. - I do now.

Many thanks for your most wonderful constructive comments.

blackknight314blackknight314over 4 years ago
Wow...

... quite the orgy.

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