by AlexisEllison
You're doing a great job making all the stories in this series feel unique. The original is still my favourite but there's a lot to be said for a series where each instalment isn't just the same thing in new people or locations. I'm genuinely excited to see where Ally & Kyle will go next!
-HonoursBoy
Who knows, maybe Dad was missing from the tent when they returned? :-)
I hope this is just the start of many more chapters.
Could it me Mom or Dad sneaking and watching?
I want Kyle going with her and adding Catalina.
Please add another chapter and soon.
Did Mom learn about the Glory Hole while cleaning ?
WE NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER AND QUICKLY
Please let us know who the peeping tom is?
What a tender and loving relationship between brother and sister.
Hope the brother follows his sister.
you're doing a great job of keeping each story in the series fresh, each with its own set of challenges for the characters to overcome. and the foreshadowing at the end is awesome, which makes me looking forward to the next installment, to learn the identity of the peeping Tom. 5*s again.
Waiting for the next few chapters...wondering about those eyes. Excellent writing. Beautiful balance.
I loved the story. My name is glen foster and I had a relationship with my stepsister. We eventually got caught. But to this day i would have a relationship with her again. I as other readers would love to know who was watching.
Love to know who caught them. Bet it was the Mum. Bet shd has seen or heard them before. Brother sister sex is hot as hell. The joining of siblings in such a intimate way is sexy.